TLC by Chrouya
Script:	Little Busters 09 [tl][#tlc][#timed][edit][#qc]
Workraw: Little Busters 09_t2_10bit_a

{TL:}and soggy qroquettes are really nasty. {(ぐずぐずのコロッケは大変まずい)}
{TL:}Viva coroquette soba! {(ミバコロッケそば)}
{TL:}But even you like tempura soba {(あなただって天ぷらそばはお好きなくせに)}
{TL:}unlike croquttes. {(コロッケとはわけが違う)}
I don't know when I'll fall asleep\NMy illness I do not know when asleep\Nいつ眠ってしまうか分からない　僕の病気

25
{TL:I recalled that mysterious letter}{ED:}I thought about that mysterious letter
{TL:I recalled that mysterious letter}{ED:}I remembered that mysterious letter.
{due to the translation of the word omoidasu}

43
{TL:(blank)}{ED:}Doesn't it bother you?
Don't they get in the way?
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Don't they get in the way when you're drinking milk and stuff?
When you're drinking milk and stuff?
{due to the split, there's an unneeded repetition}

46
{TL:I guess it's no good (くっ付かないと　くっ付け)}{ED:TLC, any suggestions?}It came off and now it won't stick.
Come on, I got to put it back!

47
What do I do?
I guess it's no use...
{so it seems the TL had this translation in the previous line (he didn't TL shimatta), so everything was shiuted}

52
Well...
Thank god...
{it's a short word of relief}

56
I've said it before but, you know your childhood friends,
I've been saying it over and over again,
{this part is what's timed}
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like me, Masato, and Kengo?  We won't always be around.
but your childhood friends like me, Masato and Kengo won't be around forever.
{this fits the timing better}

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{TL:}Girls, give them hell.{(お前たち　やっておしまいなさい)}
{TL:}Girls, give her hell.{(お前たち　やっておしまいなさい)}
{They only attack Rin}

135
Until she wins, she has to buy sweets or she will not be satisfied.
She'd buy sweets until she wins something, or else she'd not be satisfied.
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Just like a kid.
Just like in the past.
{I fixed the phrasing for better context}

146
{TL:I was shocked (私も驚いた　ぶるっときた)}{ER:}It shocked me, too.
It shocked me greatly, too.
{she says she was shocked and got her to shiver}

148
What should we do?
Listen carefully!
{she's repeating what she just said}

[11:08]
Meat Spaghetti
Omelet rice
Mixed set                   4
Pork cutlet with rice set   3
Pork fillet set             2
Pork cutlet set             1
Mince cutlet set
Grilled salmon set 
Grilled mackerel set
<-- Dish corner

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{TL:What will happen to my lunch? (どうなるんだよ　俺の夕飯は)}{ED:}What about my lunch?!
{TL:What will happen to my lunch? (どうなるんだよ　俺の夕飯は)}{ED:}What about my dinner?!
{yuuhan is dinner}

180
And there Mr. Penguin was...
And there stood Mr. Penguin.
{it's a whole line}

220
{TL:}Pork cutlet special,  Fillet cutlet special, Breaded pork on rice special, Mixed special... 
{see 1 to 4 on the sign note}

[phone1]
Received
From: 			Rin
Sub:			Untitled
What should I do?

[phone2]
Write a mail (Reply)
To: 			Rin
Sub:			Re:
Attachment: 	N/A
Body:
How abouting limiting it to three set meals?

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{TL:What should I do? (いいか　よく聞け)}{ED:}What should we do?
Listen up, everyone.

232
{TL:}What if we narrow it down to three types?{(せめて三種類に定食を絞れば)}
How abouting limiting it to three set meals?
{consistency}

[16:07]
鬱
Depression

[16:46]
愛
Love
誠
Sincerity
忠
Loyalty
{these are the main virtues of confucianism}
{later on the apples:}
義
Duty
考
Consideration
正
Righteousness


The jelly:
みかんゼリー {orange}
Orange jelly
りんごゼリー {red}
Apple jelly
ぶどうゼリー {purple}
Grape jelly

356
{TL:find the The nishizono girls lost book (N西園女子が失くした本を探せ)}{ED:}Find the book the Nishizono women have lost.
Find the book that Lady Nishizono has lost.
{nishizono-joshi, just like she calls riki shounen at first. But here she uses joshi (which is an adult kind of feeling)}